Blur

I wrote this for a contest, but never got it entered. I wrote it in the present day, but it's wrote as if it were me writing it last year. If you get what im saying thats cool, but if not just enjoy.

It feels my life has become a blur

as I give this cashed bowl its final stir

thinking of how it used to be

how if affected more then just me

could you not have just stuck around

at least till I got out of this f*****g town

I wish you would have, so you could see

not who I am, but who I am going to be

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

I really liked this. It tells a good story and it flows well. i can feel the emotions as if i was living it myself.. great job :) cant wait to read more

[Star-Runner]

Very well written I wrote my piece on here to something in this way it was called "Welcome to the world" This is very well written, Like this piece of poetry.