Look inside

 

I felt the hand of fate

Brush aside the veil of time

I fear the taste of hate

Makes love the only crime

 

I wish I could see inside

Twisted turns of your mind

Where you try to hide

From a world turned unkind

 

Hope has left an icy void

In a heart meant to feel pain

In a life no longer enjoyed

The bullet leaves little stain

 

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i found that this piece had a nice rhythm. i think the shortness of the piece actually adds to it and lends it mystery