Punishment

Sun beats down on my sun burnt skin. Shimmerin' sweat I won't soon forget. Lost inside it's no surprise. Pain in mind for many lies. Now discomfort plagues thy line, total abuse of my life. Now discomfort rules by crime total abuse of these lives. All due to selfish binds, makes me want to just break down and cry.

Author's Note

Selfish binds?

Reviews

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This sounds like a very dark and dolorous. It is as if you are opening your soul and showing the reader your pain. I thought, however, it was very well constructed and quite descriptive. Good poem construction!