Force

A Poem by Steven Bilodeau

Rain drops on my soaked sweat skin. Heavy clothes burden within. Every force is against me now. Total angst, fearful head. Heavy Force now I'm done, let me go. The waters' edge is always unknown. It takes thee in like a hand, and shows you death from your lands. I have lost and you have won. Here I lie near the sandy shore. Where my heart once was, now is gone. Forever gone.

© 2009 Steven Bilodeau

Author's Note

This is sort of Punishment Part II

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Reviews

LetiStoned

wow i really like this peom very good emotion!!
keep writing:D

Posted 16 Years Ago

Stats

106 Views
1 Review

Added on September 4, 2009

Author

Steven Bilodeau

Stratford, CT

About

My name is Steven Bilodeau, I am 23 years old and I am attending college. I am going for a Bachelors in Science Majoring in Biology and Minoring in Creative Writing. I'm engaged to an amazing girl whi.. more..