You

No comments about my grammar, just had to put my thoughts down!

You

You have come along
when my sky was grey
You have come along
when i had nowhere to stay

You come along,
when i lost all hope
You come along,
when I won't fend no more

You come along,
all you say is i want to be friends,
You come along,
and my emotions, why dont they just end,

You come along,
and take my hearth
You come along,
and my world isnt shatter, not by far.

You come along
And i know you will reject me
You come along,
and anything i want you to do,
Is you coming along, just to accept me!

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

I love this poem!!! =D

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Desire and dedication and divotional touch, nice....

[Thea]

Simply beautiful, Black! Great one! :)))

[Tai Ryens]

I like this one!

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Very nice. Simple but powerful!

[sugar]

very nice write i loved it...keep it upp

[Jeremy Baker]

Simple and to the point, adding to its impact. Well written.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very beautiful write, quite a write!!

[Valorie Lauter]

Well written..I like this very much.

[Tasha]

This was so amazing and it held so much truth. Truly beautiful.
♥ Ta'Shandra