Happiness

I'm just so happeh! ^_^

My heart smiles widely

Bubbles fill my lungs

laughter leaks from my eyes

Author's Note

short and sweet ^_^

Reviews

[Irvette Dauphine]

like it.. this is short but very nice :)

[Forever Hidden]

The best 3 sentences I've ever read in my life!

[caesarkreshen]

You write some really long poems. I was looking for something digestible and this is it.

You are right, short and sweet.

I was wishing for an "and" either beginning the last line or ending the middle line, and I realize why now. That would make it 17 syllables.

[DalainaRenee]

Very nice! It is cute!

[demureminds]

The first line just fills you up with loads of cheer haha, it's just so sweet sounding. The second just reminds me of innocence and childhood and the last is just fantastic. Haha, joyful read (:

[Serenity Faith]

I'm glad it brought you the same, Happiness ^_^ Thank you!

[Skye]

:D Happiness is a wonderful thing.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

sweet :)

[zainul]

Emily looks happy
Her laughter captivates me
I stare like an owl

This is a messy response but a real one from my heart.

[Serenity Faith]

You're heartfelt reply only adds to my happiness Zainul ^_^ Thank you!

[zainul]

I love making others happy.
You wanted to be happy today by some awesome review.
So,I chose to frequent your treasure.
Very nice of you.