A Candle

Haiku

Holder of spirits

Caged within, waxy domain

flames cry out their shame

Author's Note

Just something I did for fun ^_^

Reviews

[MIB]

Very interesting work ;) keep up the good stuff ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting closing line to the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brandon Mathis]

flames cry out their shame loved that line

[Teardrop]

So cool!

[Skye]

I love haiku! And this is beautiful, and I enjoy the imagery. Wonderful!

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Great haiku on the candle - deep meaning burn within this short poem. I like the "waxy domain" metaphor and the vivid image of "flames crying out".

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you very much ^_^

[Whiskurz]

Beautiful Haiku my friend.....Whisk

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you ^_^