Missing Angel

Missing Angel

 

I'm sure you've noticed the stars twinkling less
That the weather and the oceans
Are sustaining such commotions
Being good for the soul, I will bare and confess

 

 The reason the storms are howling and hissing
Only happening in recent history
Fortunate for me it's no mystery
All of Heaven's most adorable angel is missing

 

Of all living Earthlings, she descended into me
She gazed straight into my eyes
While she unveiled her disguise
I'm owner of her splendor that no one can see

 

I've been mesmerized since being brushed by her wing
I have an unyielding laughter, I now dance, I now sing

 

Any and all of my concerns, she completely domineers
It's intense pleasure basking in her angelic atmosphere

 

Unfair selfishness; I agree that I'm committing
With all her numerous rewards
My heart compels me to hoard
Wanting her to only soothe me, I am admitting

 

 Exclusive rights for her caressing and kissing
For domain under her shower
I will exhaust all of my power
Heaven's most adorable angel stays missing

 

                     Ron  Harrell

 

Reviews

[Tenten]

wow, this one is pure genius, never thought of it like this but it works and sounds so right together. great piece.

[BBuggy]

I think this is a wonderful piece. I love the flow and imagery.
I've been mesmerized since being brushed by her wing
I have an unyielding laughter, I now dance, I now sing
That was my favorite stanza. I can see the wing brushing the face. Great job!

[Pitta S Dev]

a great piece of writing...congrats

[PhoeniX]

wow. astonishingly great. a pleasure to read. so sweet and romantic. you write this like you've been doing it for ever.

[MorganLyn]

very nicely written. Loved teh rhyme schemes in here.
good luck in the contest!