Hay(na)ku

The hay(na)ku is a three line poem with one word in the first, two in the second, three in the third, that's it. Then it can be reversed.

Guess
Attackers fight
Some battle brewing.

Dialects
Expect notice
Lymphatic at nightfall?

Expeditious
Crows collect,
Belying taboo taste.

Eagles soar towering,
Needing prey.
Taking.

Satirists feel certain,
Intermissions shall
Nightcap?

Author's Note

Which words would you change or take out? What word(s) would you put in to replace the one(s) taken out?

Reviews

[Eternal Poet]

Poetry should never be changed, it stands as a monument, a testimony to our inner beauty

[poetdoug]

Very well done. Keep up your creative work. It encourages us all!

[Ryan Henderson]

Very good! I have never seen this style of poetry, I might just give it a go myself! Well done!