My stepsister is belle & Cinderella

The rail gave an incentive, I
want to praise my stepsister, she
is pretty and doesn’t like to fly.
The rail gave an incentive, Eye.
She likes to play pranks, rarely cries.
She wants a baby, so doesn’t like me
The rail gave an incentive, I
want to praise my stepsister, see.

Author's Note

this is a triolet with a ABa abA AB rhyme scheme, I had to leave stuff out to get the for in iambic tetrameter, so I'm now sure what message comes across the rail so to speak

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

Ah, another excellent work by you, Laura Lynn! I enjoyed this piece for the flow of it, the rhyming scheme, and the tone it set!