My stepsister is belle & Cinderella

My stepsister is belle & Cinderella

A Chapter by Laura Lynn

The rail gave an incentive, I
want to praise my stepsister, she
is pretty and doesn’t like to fly.
The rail gave an incentive, Eye.
She likes to play pranks, rarely cries.
She wants a baby, so doesn’t like me
The rail gave an incentive, I
want to praise my stepsister, see.



© 2014 Laura Lynn


Author's Note

Laura Lynn
this is a triolet with a ABa abA AB rhyme scheme, I had to leave stuff out to get the for in iambic tetrameter, so I'm now sure what message comes across the rail so to speak

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Ah, another excellent work by you, Laura Lynn! I enjoyed this piece for the flow of it, the rhyming scheme, and the tone it set!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Laura Lynn
Laura Lynn

Fairfax, VA



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