Wolves Surrounding

Two lovers find their relationship deteriorate.

Do not let it change us, 

Don't let it change us,

Let it merely bind us,

Into this infinity, us.

Perpetuation of our lovely myth,

Destroyed by a distorted truth.

If the Wolves come to near us,

Hold my palms within yours.

Embrace me as if there will be a tomorrow,

'Cause there won't be.

It's only a matter of time, my dear,

Before the Wolves finish us off.

They circle nearer every second,

Awaiting their precious dinner,

To devour our Love until it's no more.

Author's Note

I'm thinking if that last verse is a good ending but I'm not certain. As always, let me know your thoughts.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Precious words you have used in order to create a meaningful poem. I like the methaporical use of the wolves. It is not easy to associate them into a love challenge. Well done.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Lovecraft]

Ah, Capo. My thanks for soothing my ego. ;)

[CAPOLAVORO]

"ID" is my middle name and "Superego" is my last name.. :)

[Lovecraft]

Okay, my Jungian poet.

[CAPOLAVORO]

lol hehehe.. :)

[Ardra]

Embrace me as if there will be a tomorrow,
'Cause there won't be.

do you want to say the wolf will kill them..
then shouldn't it be .. Embrace me as if there will be no tomorrow :P

the pic of wolves is too cute..they dont look dangerous enough hahah... i mean i love wolves.. :)

[Lovecraft]

Th Wolves symbolize the fact that they might love each other but their relationship is about to end.

I love Wolves too. :)

[Ardra]

mmm you mean to use Wolf as a mean of showing the lack of commitment... wondering to myself :P
read moremmm you mean to use Wolf as a mean of showing the lack of commitment... wondering to myself :P
wolf i a very beautiful and fierce creature...and as they are related to dog family... i may say they sure should be loyal to their mates...but maybe the wildness does take over sometime...must have been the reason for the break up lol.... guess i have made a story out of it ... :P

[Lovecraft]

Not commitment. Their relationship is broken. I'm pretty sure Wolves mostly mate for Life. Ironic.

[Ardra]

i get it now the irony ..guess my brain works slow :)

[Lovecraft]

Maybe I should have made it more clear that their relationship just wasn't working despite their love for one another.

By the way, could you actually let me know if you like the poem or not? ;P

[Ardra]

hahah..... i know you are not into twilight...
but when i read this poem..i could imagine...
edward saying to bella to hold on... strong... to not let the hope slip even if it meant death to them...

i mean i felt the opposite of what you really wanted to say that their relationship is not working.. i felt like even in the situation of them facing death...they are committed to each other.. to see their love even through death ... am sorry to have got it all wrong lol.. my imaginations run wild cant help it :P

[Lovecraft]

Damn you! Their "Death" is simply metaphorical. Here I was thinking you a wise and powerful sorceress!

[Lovecraft]

Also never mention the nightmarish horror that is Twilight.

[Ardra]

hahaha :P guess she can also let her imagination take her somewhere not required ..

i should have kept my mouth shut and let you have imagined me as - a wise and powerful sorceress -
lol too late now...

[Lovecraft]

"Tis the truth. Once you were the fairest of maidens... :P

[Ardra]

am i dead now lol.... :P
haha i love twilight ..sorry to differ on tht... i mean i love edward ;) more than twilight lol

[Lovecraft]

Just giving you some grief, lol.