Hidden Beauty

A rough poem that I wrote in 5 minutes.

Can't find your lovely hand,

Back when we had last met.

Elusive as only you can truly be,

A silhouette dancing cross my view.

Reappearing in my warm embrace,

That faint smile upon your lips,

Which tremble when I kiss them.

A Hidden Beauty only I can witness.

Reviews

[Heather]

Beautiful :) Sometimes, the best writes happen when we just write whatever we're feeling in the moment. I think this is a good example of that!

[Zoya]

Aha, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, doesn't it. Short and sweet. A lovely write!

[Lovecraft]

Beauty is just a construct based on symmetrical features. :)

[Zoya]

Yes, but you saw something beyond that beauty. The beauty of the soul...is what I meant :)
read moreYes, but you saw something beyond that beauty. The beauty of the soul...is what I meant :)

[Lovecraft]

I know. I'm just the type of guy who avoids the "Hot" chicks and goes for the cute and quirky girls, lol.

[Zoya]

Same goes for the guys. The more muscular they are, the more I dislike them...lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, honest and painful words written. When we lose someone special and needed. They are tattoos upon the mind and the heart. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lovecraft]

Thanks, man. Had a lengthy absence from this site, lol. Just got back on here a couple days ago.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad you are back and you are welcome my friend.

[Dave]

Only five minutes huh? Very nicely done, don't expand it. You have beautifully expressed your feelings and love. Don't beat it to death.

Take care - Dave

[Lovecraft]

Thanks. It may be short but I think you're right. I'll leave it as is.

[Dave]

Great - I think its very good the way it is.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

I love this. Simple, elegant and a sweet tribute.

[Lovecraft]

Thanks. I was contemplating on whether or not I should expand it a bit.