Rage on, Little Lost Hurricane

Rage on, little lost hurricane

Spin on through my day

Thunder through these flooded lanes

And breathe and blow me far away.

Dance, little lost hurricane

Flip this house upside-down

Punch through the window Pane's

And crash it to the ground.

Oh, little lost hurricane 

Your heart so peacefully calm

Take a chance, make your move now

Becouse soon you'll be gone.

Reviews

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Simple yet soo lovely (: This amazing! (:

[Apathy To Empathy]

SImple and bitter. Hurricanes...scary but somehow calming in the eye. Thanks for the post!

[stellasautelle]

Simple, but lovely. I love it

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. oh, awesome ... has a brilliant lyrical quality to it ... very magical ...

[Lorame]

This is nice! I'm curious what prompted the writing of this poem.. ?

[Brittany W]

nice job, this poem was simple, but said so much, great write.