Woman

Kind of an incomplete poem idea I had on the metro on the way home. It was so full that I couldn't write it down. This is my attempt to try it, I was thinking this goes with a combo of that song "American Woman" and "Brother Fights" by

Oh now woman, you magical woman
Don't dare assume you have me
Oh woman, sexy woman
Don't think that I care
You have not hypnotized with breast and hair

Now woman, powerful woman
You have taken many to their knees
Woman, you sly woman
You have made my desire a desease
You tant and tease me, want you to please me
I'm your lap dog beggin upon bended knee

Oh woman, smart woman
You hooked us all with a stare
You woman, pure woman
I'm a fool at your feet
You woman, bold woman
You have begun to control me
With the oblivious ease
Now woman, true woman
You mean everything to me

Oh woman, wonderful woman
I can't seem to live without your smile
True woman, addictive woman
You are the fix I've been looking for
You woman, powerful woman
I can't excape, you are the desired disease
Now woman, ultimate woman
You mean everything to me

Author's Note

Sometimes I wish you could hear things that were in my head, well with my poetry, some of the other stuff you wouldn't want to bother with. The music and deliver is just so much better there.

Reviews

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Quite delightful...and I cannot make up my mind if your words or your obvious love for women is more enchanting!