Wishing

A girl wishing for love

Wishing on a shooting star
Just wondering where you are

Wishing you were here with me
Wondering if we're meant to be

Wishing for another dance
Wondering if I have a chance

Wishing for just one kiss
Wondering why it's you I miss

Wishing I could see you smile
Wondering if you'll stay a while

Wishing you would hold me tight
If only for tonight

Wondering why you're so sweet
You are such a special treat

You make my day a little brighter
And make my heart a little lighter

I hear your name on the wind
You really are on of a kind

So to finish, I must admit
You're an addiction I don't want to quit

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Oh, this is such a beautiful piece. Great write!!!

Heather

[Kevin Andros]

This a very sweet peice indeed! I wonder where did you get these kind of ideas! I wish I could get one too! About the peice, it has been written with the mind set of a young girl wishing and wondering. I can almost bet you a 100 bucks that no reviewer or writer have gone through without having a smile on his/her face at the end!

Wishing on a shooting star

Just wondering where you are



Wishing you were here with me

Wondering if we're meant to be



Wishing for another dance

Wondering if I have a chance



Wishing for just one kiss

Wondering why it's you I miss



Wishing I could see you smile

Wondering if you'll stay awhile



The words 'Wishing' and 'Wondering' has been used sweetly and wisely! Keep on with your work! Thanks for sharing it in here! Good luck in Writerscafe and welcome to it! ~KA~

[Steven Williams]

This is a very sweet and endearing write. You did a nice job with the ryhme scheme and the structure. Well done.

~Stephen