Loud Anger

A quick haiku loosely based on how I often feel at home

A darkness at home

Loud anger in the thin walls

I might as well leave

Author's Note

This is actually my third or so attempt at doing a haiku, though its been years since the first few.

Reviews

[Lacey Sue]

When you let you hold all your anger in I learned it doesn't help because you get to your breaking point and you lose control of it since you held it in for so long and some times the best thing is to just let it all out so you don't have to keep it in and let your balloon fill up and next thing you know it pops and you end up not knowing what to do. It's best to talk about why you're angry and what you're holding in because talking to someone helps and it'll clear your mind. Also, don't run from your problems I have a lot and it only got me shackled and arrested and taken to a mental institution and caught charges thanks to me letting my balloon explode. Speak to someone about what's going on and why you're angry.

[CLR9]

Yeah, it's pretty good. Write more like this.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

I love this format
It is wonderful to read
Third time is perfect

Now you know how I feel about your great share... :-) PS I can relate to the message within - been there a few times myself...

[Davidgeo]

The last line refutes something you said on your profile.

Don't fret though... we all eventually contradict ourselves in one way or another.

[Jeffrey J Dotson]

This is true, but I was likely going through a pretty cruddy day with my family that day and was mostly letting off steam.

[Relic]

I've been there and didn't enjoy it. Some of the worst years of my life.

[Karmee]

You did really well,
I enjoyed your haiku