Love and Joy

All words spoken in whispers

Shy to say it out loud

All sounds in the little box

Scared to hear it come out

Seeing thing that don't exsist

Hearing things all around

Wacthing the blood roll down

My pouring eyes

You took my heart and put joy in it

You made my life a wishing well

As the thoughts in my mind

Seem to go all around

Wandering where i'll be

If you weren't with me right now

Reviews

[tarag]

The poem gives us sight into someone's thoughts, which seem to be very personal, closely guarded. The vision seems to be of hope trying to use a relationship to pull clear of darkness. With the relationship comes a wishing well where better things can be conjured. Without the relationship, a life of fear and hiding. Some rough thoughts.