Waiting For You

I wrote this a few months ago

Tick tock tick tock

I am waiting for you to appear

Tick tock tick tock

Losing you has become my biggest fear

Tick tock tick

My hope in you coming back is fading dear

Tick tock tick

I wish you would have been more clear

Tick tock tick tock

Losing you is like losing the sun

Tick tock tick tock

Maybe I should listen to everyone

Tick tock tick

I am afraid I gave you the gun

Tick tock tick

And I can no longer run

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I sense the loss here and hope running out. Time moves on and the lack of sun is felt. Sad poem. I enjoyed your words and you conveyed your emotion well.

Chris