Yes's and No's

When you think everyone is your friend, then think again.

My life was loved but forgotten

My life was full of yes’s and no’s

In the hall where life is a burden

And love is a rule that no one knows

 

I thought my mind was full of cherry

But life is full of confusing people

That no one knew and understood

The way I feel, think and do things.

Reviews

[Nwang]

Life's like that. Sometimes it gives you lemons and demands apple juice. Anyways nice write.

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks for this review! I appreciate it very much :)

[aLittlePain]

Yes' and no's...well said. Life's just like that sometimes. Very relatable. R xo

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks for this review, I appreciate it so much!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Mr. Christian Bonoan,
This piece is very touching. I like the expression of pain channeled into a positive process. I know that life is not always easy or fair. I think that many need to see experiences expressed. Maybe try" Love a rule" in the fourth line and in the second paragraph , line one, is cherry cheerfullness? Fourth line; knows or understands. I hope you did not mind my input. Good writing I look forward to seeing more. God Bless you sir! Kathy

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank you for the advice, I appreciate it :) I'll do my best next time :)

[PoeticSorcery]

I feel that way myself sometimes.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes life is full of Yes and No's and uncertain. Nice Poem.

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank You :)

[Bohrium Guy]

I feel overall your imagery was well placed given the fact your probably using a translator. Overall I think its a great write that displays your feelings well.

~Rob~