underwater

just a short poem about being underwater, i used this from a creative prompt.

under the sea

a landscape

blue waves and weightless water

surrounding every move they make

small to large 

a contrast of fishes

swimming, gently, slowly

in a hurry under the sea

no heavy rocks 

flying freely like birds

passing the zero weight marshmallows in the sky 

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[redalia]

this is a very nice poem! love the imagery. made me feel peaceful.

[charlotte]

thankyou :-) glad you liked this .

[Taino]

Charlotte, quite relaxing to read. When I close my eyes and I can envision myself there. Very well written. Keep writing!

[charlotte]

hello Taino, thankyou for commenting on my poem. I am glad you like this , and glad you found it relaxing :-) i can imagine fish swimming under water sometimes feel relaxed but who knows lol maybe some fish are stressed , lol

[lostnstars]

this might seem just a short poem but i think it's perfect the way it is. I love how you described what it's like underwater and you put it into words beautifully.

Please keep on writing, you're amazing!
-lostnstars

[charlotte]

hello lost n stars .. thankyou for taking the time to read this . i am glad you like this