Love

a poem i wrote for a little school competition.

 

Love

Love is like a teardrop,

It glistens from your eye.

You fell it trickle down you cheek,

It makes you wonder why.

 

Love is like the wind,

A whisper in you ear.

It holds a secret message,

That only you can hear.

 

Love is like a model,

It’s really hard to make.

If you don’t keep building up,

That special bond could break.

Reviews

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

I loved it! u did great on the rhyming! i can nevr rhyme(oh well =]) but i rlly did like it KEEP ROCKIN!!!!

[Tina Kline]

Excellent excellent poem about love. It has a nice
flow to it as well. You write poetry really well.

Tina