My Hibernation

 Awoken from my hibernation

To find a land of green

Much different from the world of white

I’d previously seen.

 

The white was cold and strangely black:

A world of isolation.

It begged my world to sleep until

I found some consolation.

 

For many days and many nights

I toiled in my slumber;

I waited hard and long to find

A new song, dance, and number.

 

My sleeping self was unaware

Of troubles that might haunt me.

My body cold and dead enough

Life wouldn’t try to flaunt me.

 

Until I found what woke me up:

A strange, yet great sensation.

Escaping from the bitter cold

To see life’s new creation.

 

Instead of being trapped in cold,

A world that’s dimly lit,

I found myself amongst the sun:

The heat contained with it.

 

A wonderful emotion coming

From this newfound sun.

I push away the bitterness

In favor of the fun.

 

The world I walk around in now

Seems brighter, fuller, better.

A smile’s been painted on my face

Regardless of the weather.

 

This world contained in green is one

I’m truly glad to know

I wish this my world would stay this way

And never see it go.

Reviews

[Silera Martin]

it was different then what i read before and i really liked that. the flow of this poem was great and it went very smoothly. it had a lot of feeling and is a great write. :)

[Rayin]

A completly different concept on poetry I have discovered today
being of a animals perspective gives this story more feeling