I Heard His Voice

Inspirational/ Spiritual

 

 

 

Deep dark sky

Plump white clouds

Stars twinkling and a full moon peeking

        

Forgetting my purpose

Having pity for myself,

I sometimes walk, feeling like an elf.

 

I heard a voice say,

“Keep on knocking at the devil’s door,

One day he’s gonna answer”!

He’ll think you have a rapport.

 

Hold your head up!

You are my child

This is just a small sample of what you’ve compiled.

 

I’ll never give you more than you can bear

Give it to me, stop pulling your hair.

 

These things I heard from the sky.

    Yup,                                  

Look at the cloud with the big bow tie!

 

I Heard His Voice!

 

 

 

 

 

                  

 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Very inspirational. Sometimes we need to just let things go that are not under our control.
Pride can complicate our lives. I got that from this poem. Good job.

[Holly]

I really like how the first three paragraphs flow, nice and smooth.