Eyes

A Poem by Hopefull

Its amazing all our eyes can do
When all I want is to look at you
The depth your eyes reveal to me
Even more a future Ide love to see
Oh what beautiful eyes they're lovely

© 2021 Hopefull

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Audie G. Couch

Very beautiful poem. To me, it says that you look beyond a persons surface, and you did this while noting how wonderful the eyes are in general.
Great Work.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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5 Years Ago

That, I can't say. But you'll never know unless you take a chance. Right?

5 Years Ago

Its a long story not meant for here. She knows how I feel. Its just up o her now

5 Years Ago

I see.
I'm sure it will all work out the way its supposed to.

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