A finished version of For My Love

She is all these things and more, she was all those things i swore

As beautiful as the Lilly's that blow in the wind, as free as the birds that soar in the sky.

As peaceful as the trees that blow in the breeze, as bright as the stars that brighten up the skies.

As strong as the waves that crash on the rocks, as wise as the owls that hoot through the night.

As honest as a child who knows no wrongs, as brave as a knight in an endless fight.

You are all these things and more, you were all those things I swore.

Reviews

[V]

Cute and rhythmical poem. I'm usually not that much into that kind of poetry but this one read nicely. There's something light and carefree, almost about it I enjoyed. Seems like a lovely memory although only a memory as the second part of your last line implies. It's brushed with this slightly darker feeling of nostalgia, of something past that left you. At least that's what I felt. Nice one.