Autumn

Autumn is that pause

the one which makes everything seem to float

The pause is felt in the breeze

which runs cool against your skin

Autumn’s pause is that pause

which is not seen by the human eye

but it’s there

that inhaled breath

just before the first leaf of autumn

floats

to

the

ground.

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

I liked it very much because this is my favourite genre of poetry and you have expressed it all very nicely.

[leinahtan]

just before the first leaf of autumn
floats
to
the
ground.

paint an animated image in my mind of what this line beautifully described. :)

[deeps]

This is a really beautiful write.

[Extant]

Truly beautiful with a wonderful form.