Message in a Bottle

I wrote a note one day on a sheet of lined pressed wood,
All the things that mattered and the changes if I could.
I realized from this, that changes are never really easy,
Inside my stomach I felt, a strangeness running queasy.

All the words I written were reflections inside of me,
A vastness held together with a thread of my insanity.
Still I stuffed the parchment carefully in the bottle,
In hopes that one day someone views me as Aristotle.

Capped this container with a cork to hold it tight,
I cast it off to sea and sat silent through the night.
Wondering who will find the memories I have wrote,
In this bottle of timelessness that hold me by a note.

Reviews

[Sarah]

your style is amazing, your use of imagery and vocabulary is out standing! i am drawn to your work like a moth is to a light. well done!
-sarah-

[Bohrium Guy]

Hummmm "Moth to a light" I haven't heard in a while... However I have that strange effect and don't know why, but thank you for your nice review!

~Rob~

[Sarah]

not a problem rob.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is amazing and beautiful

[Bohrium Guy]

I am trying to think of a witty response on this hahahahaha

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

lol, you are making me laugh

[Bohrium Guy]

Oh I am a jack of all trades if given the right material.....

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

lol............................

[Jackie]

I read this twice. Rhyming went together very well , very well put. Up enjoyed this very much

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you so much for the nice review.