Give Her The World

Past trials and errors....

If you love someone with all your heart

Then feelings and emotions do not part

You simply want to give her all of you

In hopes the love will shine brightly thru

You will offer a shoulder or a rose

To show your heart will never close

You will hold her softly as she slumbers

Admiring all the deep loving wonders

While silently as the night lying in your arms

You think of all the passions of moments charms

Of tomorrow’s ability to show your care once more

Never leaving what you feel deep in the hearts core

Embrace the feelings as if tomorrow they'll be gone

Holding passion and love so it will see tomorrows dawn

Make every fleeting moment count giving love its ado

Never forget to say what you feel inside,

I'll always love you

Reviews

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this poem is beautiful, my friend

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you so much! Thanks for your review.

~Rob~

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome! welcome!
- Silver

[Sarah]

you know i always love your work, and this shows just how frail true love, an ever lasting love can be. its beautiful dance of just two, this is simplistically and extravagantly beautiful!

[Bohrium Guy]

I believe with the right person the world would be awesome for two. Things don't need to be looked at as a struggle but a union of two people that lasts forever.

Thanks you for you review. Nala

~Rob~

[Sarah]

not a problem Simba

[Bohrium Guy]

;) I just can't wait to be king....