Want Of You

Spark the wrong thoughts and my head thinks of things....

To feel your heart against my chest

My arms around you, laid to rest

Lips to touch the softness of you

Hands to feel the warmth you do

Tracing curves body well defined

Losing our thoughts so entwined

Body flowing like a candle flame

Searing fire, two lovers the same

Returning the gaze a deepness love

Endless time were given from above

Us, we as one just you and I

Eternity spent forever I cry...

Reviews

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is a beautiful poem, love it

[Bohrium Guy]

Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for your nice review.

~Rob~

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome!!
-Silver

[Sarah]

what if it was the proper thoughts being sparked? and maybe being inspired is a good thing! very well written Simba

[Bohrium Guy]

One would feel its more then words written. Maybe Questions and Answers, a photo and a voice. All things sing a musical composition but alas the lyrics lie waiting...

[Sarah]

the thing is are the lyrics waiting forever, for i feel that there are also a chance that such lyrics may have a meaning sooner than you think possible.