Longing To Be

Not soon enough....

First sight etched its vision in me

Giving the passion of wanting to be

Close to touch, not four hours away

Wanting her near knowing she's OK

Holding hands being able to touch

To hear her voice whisper so much

Adorable smile that only she bears

Warming my heart to know she cares

This is my longing to be right now

Soon I will be there this I will vow

This will complete me without worry

I wish this would come, please hurry

Reviews

[Alias]

I really like this, did you write it about someone in particular? It reads like something written FOR not ABOUT a special someone, I hope you sent it to her/him x

[Bohrium Guy]

I actually did write it for someone and I believe she read it just didn't post her review here ;) Thank you for your review.

[Lover Of Words]

Goodness. You surely know how to leave us speeches. Nicky done

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you for the awesome review..

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[Dead]

I love this :) I hope you realize how amazingly talented you are.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, but I am just a simple man.... With dreams of sharing my thoughts.

[Dead]

I've been thinking about talking to the authors of poems on here and making a book of poems... Do you think that'd work?

[Bohrium Guy]

Dunno, never tried. So I can't give advice.

[Dead]

oh ok ,