Fear In Me

Just thoughts

Anxiety attacks fear of rejection

Mind memories of the reflection

Meeting physical a flame desire

Afraid of Halon dowsing the fire

Age withered wrinkles of the past

Making me fear things won't last

Loyalty loss and a heart to drop

Feelings change strings to crop

Last I stand alone with my care

While I watch it slip into the air

My heart my soul reborn the pain

Love is lost silent without a gain

Reviews

[Anneli Jo]

Very beautiful poem. It can be very helpful writing about pains, and fears. I love the first line, because one big cause for anxiety is a fear of rejection. Fear is a real thing, and it doesn't have to mean weakness. And these fears that you have, aging, loss, love, loneliness, are all real. Good job, I hope I interpreted that alright!

[Bohrium Guy]

Right on mark.... Thanks for the review and taking the time to read my worx.

[Anneli Jo]

No problem!

[cloud]

Nouns seem to be interpreted as adjectives in some of the lines. Just curious, how--in your opinion--would anxiety attack fear of rejection?

100/100

[Bohrium Guy]

Psychology has never given a proper term to twisted thinking or writing. Expression is a matter of words and actions. Thanks for the review... (I was actually expecting a page full of words in the review :) )

[cloud]

No, I only do that to trolls. lol The 'hello there' you saw earlier was between me and the writer. He asked me something and I showed him.

[Bohrium Guy]

No worries I thought it comical in some sense. Since I am far from new here. I know how things work. Still it was funny to see.
Poison is a good guy, so its all good.

Thanks for the smile....

~Rob~