Soft Whispers

Just passing a moment of thought....

Slow words gifted flowing gracefully,

Sentences of love turning musically.

Thoughts of being entangled dear,

Passions ignite deep without fear.

Bodies caressed in emotions bliss,

Caring touch with an endearing kiss.

Eyes locked oblivious to the night

Lovers experiencing feelings right.

Candle lit moments shimmering,

Flames flicker time endearing

A rose or phrase given a course,

Passions heat growing the force.

I offer my hand to walk the trail,

Whispering that love will not fail.

If only you open your mind and heart,

Then we can begin to make it a start.

Reviews

[Drama Child]

My favorite kind of poetry, the classic lyrical-rhyme of love. Thank you for sharing!

Quick question: in the last couplet,
"If only you open you mind and heart,
Then we can begin to make it a start."
Do you mean if only you open *YOUR* mind and heart.
Just a little knit-picking on my part..
I still loved it! :)

[Bohrium Guy]

Shhhhh... you caught me raw writing out my thoughts. LOL thanks for having my 6 Hugs.

~Rob~

[Drama Child]

Oh, I would never want to interrupt the talent of raw writing.. Write-on good sir', LOL.
And you are very welcome! ;)

[Bohrium Guy]

I got talent? Hahahahahahaha I think its a bit tarnished these days.

[Drama Child]

Tarnished-Talent!?!? eh' sounds poetic to me.. Roll with it.. lol

[Bohrium Guy]

Tarnished-Talent reminds me of looking at the Tidy Bowl commercials.... I think I will stay Mr Clean.

[Drama Child]

Well, yea I guess when you put it that way.... ;)

[Jade]

I really enjoyed your third stanza a lot, this was a really well written wrirte