Silk Tension

You pause before you touch me

 letting anticipation tighten

  like silk pulled slow.

My breath stutters

 your smile curves

 The space between us hums.

When your hand finally meets my skin

  the world exhales with me.

Reviews

[Randall]

Curly Grace,

There are times when anticipation is better than the act.
When your breathing can not be controlled.
When humming becomes a song, directing one's hand to the place where a touch is most needed. Finally letting the world and you exhale.

Well, that's just a thought, I'm probably wrong! :)))
Very nice poem, well written. You chose descriptive words, guiding the reader to the final goal

[redd Brick Keshner]

It’s all about timing in most if not all things in life! Exquisite 🕊️🙏🏻

[JessyJacob]

Hi,
I too feel the same anticipation is better than act. In this way we dream every human dreams 💗 living together though distance between takes the space.

Beautiful lines and art work. This is one of your best erotica and truly romantic.

Jessy Jacob ❤️