How much i love her

written for a class in high school

                        How Much I Love Her

Oh, how her chestnut brown eyes look upon me
And how she talks to me, what makes her sound so sweet.
Although I was nervous and my stomach motioned like the sea
I fell in love with her upon our first meet.

The thoughts we shared since the start
And how they seemed so in tune with mine
It made my heart almost skip a beat.
I'm jubilant for this love I did find.

Her soul is filled with beauty she does not see.
She's caring and loving, helping anyone she can.
Her glamorous creativity even inspires me.
I love her even though she already has a man

I wish for her love for all eternity
I know that she cares; yet she won't have me

Reviews

[MC Blodeuwedd]

You know I should get credit.. I wrote that for you basically

[F. Nazarov]

Well, the outcome was a shocker.

I wish for her love for all eternity
I know that she cares; yet she won't have me

I can relate, bitter times and broken people.
Whoever said love was priceless got it all wrong.