Hope

The title says it all.

•It grows up in a barren land

•First seed then shoot

•A leaf and stem

•Growing larger and larger still

•It bursts forth spreading light and life across the sand

•Touches all with fragrant bloom

•And never fades away

 

~A.J.P.~

 

 

 

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Oh my gosh. The chances are next to impossible, but have you seen the ending movie from the game of Final Fantasy VIII?! It is exactly like this picture is painted, and it is exactly the same momentous triumph over lost hope.

Such a beautiful picture using nature to show us how much hope can really save us from ourselves and from the harsh barren world.
It will never fade away.

Truly wonderful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Said so much in so few words. Photo made your words come alive.
Coyote

[WriterSki7]

Finally . . . Great poem. Glad you finally decided to start sharing (hint hint). Don't forget to look around at other people's writing . . . it can really be inspiring!

Dang . . . hoped I'd be the first to post on one of your poems . . .

[Wolfbaby]

Ooh! I like this! :D This is a really good way to describe hope. I would either remove the period on the first line, or add punctuation to the other lines. Over all this was really neat! Great work!