Injured Dove

Weeping like rain,
Smiling through pain.
Running from hurt,
Crumbling to dirt.
Falling from sky,
The dove will now die.

~A.J.P~

 

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Wow... really heartbreaking.
So short but so powerful in the imagery. You can see it scene by scene with every single line. That is a hard thing to do, but it came out amazingly.

So sad... and captured and shared so well with all its sentiments.
I think everyone sheds a tear for that injured dove.

Memorable, and if I knew how to favorite this thing with the new site I would. But the favorite option disappeared *angrily shakes fist at the site changers*

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. The pain can overtake us and we can feel like we are dead.
Coyote

[Shutterbug]

This is a very strong poem. Very good Write Thanks