Would Anyone Care

Part 1 to a 2 part short "story" (not really a story) Just thoughts from the new song I discovered today.... * Based off the lyrics from the song "Would Anyone Care" by Citizen Soldier

Would anyone Care?

Would Anyone Notice?

If I chose tonight

If this was the last line

Would Anybody See Me

Would Anybody Understand

If I threw this fight

If I just took one final step

Would Anybody Care?

Would Anybody Cry?

If my feet slipped from this ledge

Down into the darkness

Would Anybody Want me

Would Anybody Love me

If they saw the things inside my head

If they could feel what I feel

Would Anything Change

Would You All be Fine

If I was looking for a reason not the quit

If I was looking for light through my darkness

Would Anybody Care?

Would Anybody Notice?

If tonight I disappeared......

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

It doesn't matter whether anyone else cares. The question is, do you care?

[Chris Shaw]

I think Hayllie, that many can feel like this on a down day. If the feelings persist then that’s a problem. There are times when we can all feel so alone. You describe those feelings well here.

[Hayllie]

Thank you for your comment! I think I am not alone when feeling so low before but thankfully I had someone to be there and help me up

[Coyote Poetry]

The below lines. I have asked often dear Hayllie.
"Would Anybody Care?
Would Anybody Notice?

If tonight I disappeared......"
We must lead with concern, kindness and listen. Powerful and worthwhile poetry shared my dear friend.
Coyote

[Hayllie]

Mental illness is a problem that nobody wants to believe exist but it does and I think that's why we need to have compassion for those around us because we never know who is suffering but looks so happy inside.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Hayllie. I lost two brothers to suicide and we will never know why.