Human hell

I don't know who I am. I dont know what I am. My name, conor, simply a title that can be changed. Am I really man if I have the ravenous rage of a beast. Am I really a beast if I have the logic of a well mind. Is this humanity? The cruelness I want to give them, as they have given me, but with the mind to know the conciquences. So pointless. Why have the mind when you can never over come the rage but only force it down? Why have the rage if you know what will happen if you act on it. The battle of emotion and logic has always been within me. Some days one will over come the other and then I truely become something other than human. I am beast or mind. Somewhere in between, this is truely human. The human hell.

Reviews

[Mia]

Why people think they are anything but animals...really baffles me! I think we can all relate to your internal battle. Great write!

[Boy of the red]

thank you

[Kaylor Mason]

Oh this brings back memories . . . I've often thought normal human society is merely a worldwide psych ward, where the inamtes are in charge of the asylum . . . it's all an incredible joke that can make anyone laugh.
Just spend a couple of weeks on suicide watch and you'll find out how hilarious it really is . . .

[Boy of the red]

haha been there. thank you for the review

[SlightlyOdd]

Hmmm... I find this logical and oddly comforting. I'm not quite sure what you intend to do with this but, it is well written and makes sense. You could really go anywhere with or simply leave as is. Overall a rather nice little paragraph.
-SlightlyOddd

[Boy of the red]

I don't really know what I'm gona go. It was a note I made in like 2 minutes of complete clarity

[SlightlyOdd]

nice, it seems like something you'd been thinking about for a while it's good really now you can choose to expand or just not to

[Starlit Dhrub]

Hmm....your dilemma is perfectly reasonable....well put!!!

[Boy of the red]

Thank you!

[Starlit Dhrub]

welocme

[ForeverNever]

You didn't share this one with me:P
But I really love it.
I can emphasize and everything with this piece.
Please continue, you should make it into a short story.

[Boy of the red]

i will in time

[ForeverNever]

Looking forward to it:)