Rainin' Love

This is just an interpretation of an afternoon well spent.

 

 

My girl and I walked along the river

The sun was not in the mood to shine

The water lazy,

The wind stood still,

I've loved her forever,

I always will.

 

We laughed as the birds flew lazily by,

Saw Butterflies dance.

Kissed deeply

Passion breath.

Felt love, desire, heat.

Here comes the rain.

Here comes the rain

 

Author's Note

Yeah, this is just a day that happened a while back, me writing what I remember.

Reviews

[Amber Watson]

It's awesome how you can remember what happend a while ago and then put it in a poem or story. This peice was wonderful to read. I really enjoyed it. You are a great writer keep up the great work.