Red Ink(c)

i think this about as straight forward as anything i've ever written.

Red Ink (December 2010)

I wonder, will

She be more

Than memory? 

Red ink bleeding 

Through the pages

Of my mind.

A temptress' kiss.

Oh, supple lips

Leaving heaven

And hell, both

Satisfied.

Stiletto heels;

Red dressed Goddess

Bedeviling 

Damned creatures that

Long for her call.

Flames on my mind 

And lips on my brain.

Oh, I pray that 

This memory will

Never fade.

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

I loooove the wicked, sensuous, simmering undertones, the sizzling imagery that brings this enticing, sultry femme fatale to life in such an addictive, enchanting, bewitching and provocative way. I didn't want the read to end...got swept up by the bedevilling sweet seduction of it.

Hot and smokin'! ;-)

[Lilly Negoi]

ouch...:)...i'm sorry but this is far too good for any comment :)...100/100

[TBird J.]

Oo Oo! What a temptress you have here! "Flames on my mind
And lips on my brain." Great, great line. She sounds evil and divine, loved it!

[MuSe Ampoule]

powerful and sensual piece...just a lil naughty....mmm...very good! Love everything about it!!

[Mason]

very sexual. i like it a lot. it flows very nicely. well done

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Thats wonderful ,painful, passionate and strong ..I loved:
Flames on my mind
And lips on my brain.
its strange, your pain is not sorrow, but hope in memory....
It posses so much honesty

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OHHHHH I like this!! alot!! Sizzling and sensual read..love the last stanza..great write my friend :)