Red Ink(c) II (Flames)

...a literal continuation of Red Ink, but i thought it looks more epic if i just posted the sequel (not really a sequel...a continuation) separately...possibly more, if i feel inspired...? :)

Red Ink(c) II (December 2010)

Oh, my

Beautiful woman

Made of flames, no

Mild devil not 

Tempered and tame.

A bewitching fire;

Conjuring blissful

Spells of hot steam,

Melting ice cold sanity.

Changing reality.

Oh, I've seen

Puddled minds

Evaporate

With but one taste

Of burning fire.

But me, I pray

To my devil everyday,

Dressed in red flames,

That she torches my soul

Again and again!

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

You do realize that you are on FIRE, right, Light? And clearly a sucker for delightful yet titillating punishment from this vamp, siren, devil woman!
"That she torches my soul / Again and again"
A courageous, sizzling compilation in continuation of a hazardous infatuation. The untempered passion and vibrant imagery adds to the brilliance of this hot piece. This could very well become an interesting mini series of steamy, dangerous liaisons!

[Lilly Negoi]

"But me, I pray
To my devil everyday,
Dressed in red flames,
That she torches my soul
Again and again!"
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:D pleeeeeeeeease find a continuation to this!!!!!!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

thats the pain of love in fire...Its beautiful expression, woman in flames, I wish she never feels as she can`t be burned, her element is fire, to torches every soul is easy for her, but she can`t ever stop...

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oh..sensual sensations! What a hot pyre! the end is flaming!...pardon the puns..great write