Falling

Falling down

Hurtling to the ground

As i fall my life flashes before my eyes

The people I've loved

The people I've hurt

The lessons I've learnt

The battles I've won

The love I've felt

The hate I danced with

The joy I embraced

The anger I accepted

The contradicting dual natures that make up what's me

And I see the earth

About to accept death

Till my body leans to the side

A change in direction

Off to the Ocean

I see I'm not done

There is more to be accomplished

Until then,

I live on and postpone the fall for another day.

Reviews

[Kgorometja]

There's a lot going on here, very well written. That last line is my favourite, good work

[JayDee]

Great piece from life's happenings. Very nice

[PHFASCES]

Thank you. i try.

[Sami Khalil]

"the battles I've won
The love I've felt
The hate I danced with
The joy I embraced
The anger I accepted"

Hard or soft falling. No matter. We will all experience. Bravo...:).................

[PHFASCES]

Thank you very much. I'm humbled and grateful that you enjoyed it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:).......

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PHFASCES]

Thank you very much

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

very much welcome

[lily]

One little thing, "The I embraced" I don't know exactly what that was supposed to be, but, other than that, I see no mistake.
I love this. Such a real life scenario, and it was so beautifully written. Good work!

[PHFASCES]

Thank you for pointing that out. it's joy i embraced. Thank you for the review. highly appreciated.