Numb

Numb

A Poem by Brii
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Just something I wrote when I was feeling...well nothing

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The day she went numb
The sadness overtook her
The anger sizzled down
The happiness disappeared
And the little hope that was left
gone.

© 2014 Brii


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I think Brii you could have expanded everything about her. "The anger sizzled down" I like that but it could go places worth exploring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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