Pushed then Fallen

A short poem I wrote about a friend that commited suscide, we miss you.):

On the edge of breaking

How could we not see the signs?

      Blinded from the truth,

      Misguided by your smile

Your reflection shines in our tears.

Your voice melted into our ears.

      This pain is just too real,

There’s just too much that time cannot heal.

      Dreams and Hopes destroyed

Beaten down by words

He now faces the world with death in his hands.                           

Reviews

[Smirking Poison]

Beautiful, and full of sorrow and intent

This pain is just too real,
There’s just too much that time cannot heal.

- reminds me of the song My Immortal by Evanescence which may be of interest to you.

Best luck to you and your muses... and to your fallen friend
- Domani Poison

[YoungWriter20095]

I MISSHIM SO DAMN MUCH :'(...............R.I.P