Zero to One

The probability of you falling for me is zero to one. If I'm into head games then what we're doing is so much fun. Every time you're around, I can't move away. I'll be there still. I'll find myself fall for you, again and again, crushing my will.
I am a mess. I am depressed from missing you like I do. I am distressed. I am obsessed with making you want me too. The possibility of me letting you leave is rather far-fetched. If you're into head games then you should know that we're perfectly matched. Every time you turned me down, I won't walk away, despite your goodwill. You'll find your self worth sucked dry, again and again..

Reviews

[Jim Roberson]

I, personally, would take this out of paragraph form and make it look more like a poem. I think it would make it easier to read. But the writing itself is really good. And that's all that really matters, for the most part.