So Serious

This song is about basically my inure thoughts. I think my mind is like twins fighting each other until one dies. The thing is no one will know who will win because their twins.

Minds in a funk, - days feel like months, - school is my kryptinight. - heart skips a bet, - people stair at me - nothing seems good tonight. - ohoh oh ohoh - My heart beatbeats out of key. - ohoh oh ohoh - I speak out of tone and you stair at me - and say, - Why you so serious, - don't be delirious. -It's ok ya it's alright. - Don't be so serious, - be more mischievous. - Break some rules, don't be uptight. - You'll be alright. - I feel so uptight, - feelings not right, - like my heart on overdrive. -  Money and fame, - no ones to blame, - for what is lost for life. - ohoh oh ohoh - My heart beatbeats out of key. - ohoh oh ohoh - I speak out of tone and you stair at me - and say, - Why you so serious, - don't be delirious. - It's ok ya it's alright. - Don't be so serious, - be mysteries. - Make some moves, and show them why - you'll be fine...... 

Reviews

[Persona]

I love the layout, it's appealing! I get the impression that this is a song and I think it'd make a great one. Are you going to write a character singing walking casually across the street or anything? Or are they singing to another person at the park? I think a sense of setting would make this a little better!

[WingsToFly]

interesting write. Good one. :)

[babygirl]

I like it

[Silhouette]

Nice way with your words, I like it. Kudos to you! :)

[Lino Rie]

thank you, and you can always tell me anything. and I mean ANYTHING.