Sleep

Sleep

A Poem by BreannaAutumn

My sleep is the only place 
I get to see your face anymore
If I could close my eyes forever 
and dream of you
I just might
I just might
Those pretty eyes
Those lovely lips
Keep me broken into bits
Why must you be so cruel
as to leave my side?
Can't we try to compromise?
I know it's late
but you're on my mind
Come stay the night
Just one last time
You've heard it once
but I still whisper it
No one else
could ever love you like this

© 2014 BreannaAutumn


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Words of love whispered the gentle kind your always on their minds Bless the world for love is blind some just can't see the hell they caused.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful, I enjoyed this extremely. I love poems that are short but still packed full of emotion and story. Bravo for doing what few can actually achieve. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BreannaAutumn

11 Years Ago

thank you very much!!

You've heard it once
but I still whisper it
No one else
could ever love you like this

Above lines are brilliant my friend..great work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you put my thoughts on paper, eloquently.

''Just one last time''

Is it ever, one last time ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


I've never left your side
nor have I shown my face
just dig it
between the sheets, babe
HAI!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


So cool to me. I really like this one and the longing of her. Well done...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack Kennedy

11 Years Ago

Him* sorry for that typo!!!
My sleep is the only place
I get to see your face anymore
If I could close my eyes forever
and dream of you
I just might.

This was most prettiest dream ever. Very romantic dear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


a romantic dream the best place to live out your fantasy

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice piece of writing here... But please tell me what sleep is? I have never heard of it... lol

Posted 11 Years Ago



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BreannaAutumn
BreannaAutumn

Rathdrum, ID



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Hey everyone. I'm Breanna and I'm 19 years old. I'm a college student. I'm bisexual, so you will find alternating genders in my writing. If you write a review on a piece of mine I will do the same for.. more..