Your Heart

Your Heart

A Poem by BreannaAutumn
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Some of my poems are small. Some are very impactful. You may find my writing seems a bit childish, but I keep it on this website 95% for myself. So if you like them, I appreciate that.

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I wish that you'd be here
I wish that you'd stay
because right about now
your heart seems so far away
I wish that you loved me
I wish that you cared
I wish when you cried
that I could be there
I know I was wrong,
I was so lost in myself
but now that you're gone
it seems there's nothing else
I could beg for forgiveness
In hopes that you'd give in
but all that I want
if for you to listen
I know that it's too late
and I'm glad you've moved on
I'm glad that you're happy
after so long
because I was painful
too hard for you to bear
but once in a while
I realize just how much
of me I shared
Every moment was like
living a dream
because everything I needed
was right in front of me
I can never take back the words
that shattered your heart apart
I don't expect you to forgive me
or even begin to start
but just know 
that every feeling I ever felt
every smile you put on my lips
every blush from your sweetness
and every word I'd ever spoke
was the most honest truth
and I know deep inside my aching heart
I will never forget you

© 2015 BreannaAutumn


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very smooth... I want to say perfectly smooth however you would have had to punctuate it.. I saw some places that could have been comma'd at least even if only or dramatic affect.. it was very sing-songy!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very hurting and loving poetry written ever Nice write I feel your truthful feeling bleeding through the words you have shed here today.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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BreannaAutumn
BreannaAutumn

Rathdrum, ID



About
Hey everyone. I'm Breanna and I'm 19 years old. I'm a college student. I'm bisexual, so you will find alternating genders in my writing. If you write a review on a piece of mine I will do the same for.. more..