The Light In The Darkness

Your one little light of happiness may be gone any moment. Hold on to it for as long as you can

That one light that you have in all this hell....keep them. Don't let anyone tell you what you can and can't do. If you have to do something for your light, keep it shining. As long as you keep this light, you can keep your sanity.

Author's Note

This is my first poem, so if it sucks sorry.

Reviews

[His]

This is very true and has a really deep meaning. Even if it's short and simple it has more meaning than most other poems. Once a friend of mine wrote a page long poem and even though it was really long you couldn't understand what she was trying to say. It takes talent to get your point across :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

so true we have to keep true to ourselves and not waver or try to be like others. I think esp that poets and artists are different and it makes u s all original and interesting keep our light shining lovely little poem

[LazerRays]

I usually read a persons most recent poem and their first to understand the writing style they try.
This was a beautiful piece that is really good. Maybe try to give it a poetic form? Break up the sentences with return? It's really good, it's just sort of clumped together

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Not bad for a first write tho.
Just put it in stanzas :)
Full rating.

[Jess]

The meaning of the lines is deep and powerful. The feelings are portrayed nicely. I just suggest to write it in a poem form...creating stanzas. Otherwise good job.