The Sea

The Sea

A Poem by Brett Hernan





Wind frisked
wave
piles of
fine drops
blown,

toppled
sideways

horizontal
white
spray

over
green
sheet

Being,

also
disturbed

Constantly,
from
beneath.










 
 

© 2017 Brett Hernan


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Wonderful imagery and flow to this poem. “Wind frisked wave” - lovely alliteration. The ocean’s restlessness described well at the end. Well- written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Brett Hernan

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Annette.
I thought you would enjoy it.
Your appreciation is reciprocated,.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

8 Years Ago

Your words are welcome and always my pleasure to read Brett!

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Brett Hernan
Brett Hernan

Hobart, Tasmania, Australia



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Low-resolution sample only. Born 1968. All of the images accompanying each of these written works are my own. (Except that one of the guy putting a flower into a soldier's rifle barrel!) more..